Can you make sure that your child gets the best education by sending him/her to a private school?
Private schools have a lot more activities and provide your child various offers that normal schools don't have. Because the school owns a lot more money then other schools do, it can offer your child better learning conditions in a cleaner and prettier building. The students are able to read newer books, use acceptable toilets and enjoy lots of different activities. An other advantage is that they have the possibiltiy to go on more class trips.
However, teachers at normal schools are as good as private school teachers.Not every familiy can finance school education for its child though. Most private schools dement a high payment from the families of its students. Some do this to scare off students from a lower social class.
All in all it doesn't really matter where you decide to send your child - it's going to learn the same everywhere.
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We think it's a good essay because it continues both sides, advantages and disadvantages, and she comes to a comprehensible conclusion!
good job Judith
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Very nice! This essay is quite short but very pregnant. You did a great job by confronting the positive and negative aspects.
We are with you by saying that is doesn´t matter to a private or a normal school, because mostly there is no difference between the education.
Try next time to write a bit longer=)
Greetz, Sandra and Alisa =)
We think that your ideas about privat schools are good, but the end is a bit indetermined. We think you should decide between the two school types.
Max and Maxi
than with "a", please.
Good job, Judith and interesting topic!
by Lara
to provide somebody with sth
better than
endurable
another
demand
payment for school = tuition: charge high tuition
Yeah, I agree, Judit, in he end it boils down to how much work each student is willing to put in...You did a good jobhere! Use still more connetcting words, and show your organization (new paragraph for new thought, intro, main body, conclusion...)
to provide somebody with sth
better than
endurable
another
demand
payment for school = tuition: charge high tuition
Yeah, I agree, Judith, in the end it boils down to how much work each student is willing to put in...You did a good job here! Use still more connetcting words, and show your organization (new paragraph for new thought, intro, main body, conclusion...)
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